Can't you see? (Chapter 5)

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CAN'T YOU SEE (CHAPTER 5)
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Oh yeah, I have to go to school tomorrow cause there'll be MOS for the new students. Since I'm a part of osis comettee so I have to come too. I love going back to school again, but I don't really like the 'waking up early' part. Oh well, I just have to face it, right?

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Can't you see? (Chapter 4)

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Can't you see? (Chapter 3)

(BEBI'S POV)

I walked very fast, simply ran, leaving Prissy behind. I could hear her voice was calling at my name. She wanted to continue the talk but I won't. Because all she wanted to say was just sorry, I knew it and I didn't wanna hear that word from her.
I kept on walking until I felt tired, finally I sat down on the side of the street. Not only I didn't get her, I also had my heart broken this time. How stupid I was. I should've known that she won't say YES. I should've known that she still loved that guy. Ugh how I love her 'till death!
I took a deep breat and let it out again. I did it several times in order to clear my head and my mind, but it didn't work at all. I covered my face with two hands, frustated. Just then, I felt something hit the back of my head.


Bebi: "Shit!"

I turned around and looked down to see a small pebble on the ground next to me. I looked up, wanting to know who the hell kick that damn pebble. There, I saw Ioo, my best bud, with a big grin planted on his face.

Ioo: "Whoops. Sorry man, I didn't see you there"
Bebi: "You did it on purpose didn't you?"
Ioo: "Well..."
Bebi: "Why the hell you did that?"
Ioo: "Well.. hmm.. I was just walking around enjoying the fresh air and kicking some pebbles wondering where the hell are you because you were not coming to my house as we've already planted yesterday. And lucky for me, I saw you were sitting here looking frustated. I thought it might be a good idea to kick some pebbles hehehe" -and there he goes again trying to be funny, which it didn't work at all. Yeay for you Brother.
Bebi: "Yeaah verry good idea" -I'm not in the mood for jokes right now.

Ioo looked at me with a weird look for a second, and weirdly he nodded his head like he already knew all my problems. I looked at his winning face wanted to know what he thought he knew.

Bebi: "What?"
Ioo: "What's with the what?"
Bebi: "Uugggh" I got up, wanted to leave but Ioo pulled me and i sat down again.
Ioo: "Whooaa easy there big guy, I was just kidding. So what's wrong?"
Bebi: "Nothing."
Ioo: "No. There's no nothing because I can smell something here."
Bebi: "Smell what?"
Ioo: "Broken heart." -he said that, and once again a big grin planted on his face.
Bebi: "H-how.." -I was going to say 'how do you know' but he cut my words.
Ioo: "I know things bro. What happened actually?"
Bebi: *looked at him hesitate* "you said you 'know things'?"
Ioo: Well it's allright if you don't wanna tell me. I just wanna say, get over it and you'll be better soon, trust me. Well, bye bro!"

He was just 3 meters away from where I was sitting and I pulled him back to sat down beside me. I couldn't stand it, I had to talk to someone. So I told him what's wrong, and as always he listened to me. He was such a great listener, I had to admit that. And once I finished my story he tapped my back.

Ioo: "Why'd you have to be such a baby? You loved her right?"
Bebi: "You know that for sure."
Ioo: "How much?"
Bebi: "untold"
Ioo: "You want her to be happy no matter what?"
Bebi: "If it is the best thing for her, why not?"
Ioo: "How about you make her dream come true?"
Bebi: "Which dream? You know, she has a looooooooot of dreams."
Ioo: "Koyo, duh?"
Bebi: "So I have to... WHAT?"
Ioo: "You know what I mean."
Bebi: "Well, if it will make her happy...."
Ioo: "You don't have to do that if you don't want to."
Bebi: "But I want to. I want to make her happy. That's all."

"This aint the first time she's done it before
And its hard to face the truth
Im the fool in love with the fool
Whos still in love with you"

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it's original, it's MINE :)

A little bit akward I know, I just need to get over this chapter as soon as possible and move on to another chapter. Sorry for the very late posting. Keep on reading, friends. Hope you like it.

(click for the previous chapter): chapter 1 - chapter 2

Can't you see? (Chapter 2)

Do you still remember the story called CAN'T YOU SEE that written by Nchaa? Well a view weeks ago I was having a boring days and I thought it wasn't a bad idea to continue the story. So here it is guys, the second part of CAN'T YOU SEE.

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(PRISSY'S POV)

He left and al I could do is just starring at him as he walked away. Speechless. I didn't understand, it was to soon. I couldn't even say a word. He really meant it, it was no joke. But I couldn't just say YES to him when I didn't even know what I was feeling. I loved him, yes I did. But I just couldn't get over Koyo yet.

Prissi: "Ugh this is way to confusing, better talk to Nchaa"

So I went to Nchaa's house. She opened the door and let me in. I told her everything, every detail. Just when I finished, she looked at me with the 'you've-gotta-be-kidding-me' look.

Nchaa: "Stupid!" -she used to say that when she didn't like my idea.
Prissy: "What?"
Nchaa: "Yeah, you know; S-T-U-P-I-D? STU-PID!"
Prissy: "Reason?"
Nchaa: "You should've say YES! You know he loves you! He'll do anything for you just to make you happy. He even left his flight to philipine when he heard you were in the hospital! He left his race! And you know it for sure, he's been dreaming about that race for like... let say FOREVER. And you still don't know what to say?!" -I could possibly tell she wasn't breathing when she said that.
Prissy: "I still love Koyo"
Nchaa: "Forget him!"
Prissy: "Yeah I would if I could" -I saiad sarcasticlly.
Nchaa: "For God's sake, Priss! He doesn't even care about you! You never talk to him even once. Open your eyes, darl! Realize it, he's not the one. You're just wating your time if you leep on loving him. Forget it forget him let him stay out of your mind!" -She sounded really emosional.
Prissy: "You know? You made it sound VERY EASY."
Nchaa: "It IS easy."
Prissy: "Well, if it IS easy, tell me, why can't I do it?"
Nchaa: " Because you never try Priss." -She almost shouted.

Oyeah she caught me right there. She was right. I never try to forget about Koyo. And pluss, I kept on thinking about him more and more often now days. I guess I should try it now. I don't wanna stuck with him forever don't I?

(NCHAA'S POV)

Ugh I can't believe Prissy. I mean, how come she didn't say YES to Bebi when she allready knew that Bebi loved her so much. I hate her when she kept on talking about that Koyo guy, how much she loved him, how much she missed him, bla bla bla bla. Well, I have to admit that it was MY fault that she was in love with him, and now I really regret it.

Nchaa: "Here, let me tell you. Did Koyo ever care to you even once?"
Prissy: "No." -she said softly.
Nchaa: "Did Bebi do that?"
Prissy: "Always."
Nchaa: "Did Koyo ever talk to you even once?"
Prissy: "No." -She said even more softly.
Nchaa: "Did Bebi did that?"
Prissy: "Everyday."
Nchaa: "Did Koyo ever NOTICE you even once?"
Prissy: *shook her head*
Nchaa: "Did Bebi do that?"
Prissy: "*nodded her head*
Nchaa: "HA! You see the result here; Koyo NEVER talked, cared, even he never NOTICED you. While on the other side Bebi loves you so much that he'll do anything for you. And what was that mean? It means that you're STUPID for wasting your time for Koyo..."
Prissy: "I guess I should try"
Nchaa: "Right! Just stop all this madness about Koyo thing.. ? ... wait, what did you just say?"
Prissy: "You heard me."
Nchaa: "No. Repeat!"
Prissy: "I guess... I should... try"
Nchaa: "Really?"
Prissy: "Yeaah, I can't stuck with him forever, Can't I?"

"Stuck on you
been a fool too long I guess
it's time for me to come on home
guess I'm on my way"

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it's original, it's MINE :)

Need some ideas. I will post another chapter as soon as that ideas come. Keep on reading, enjoy :D

(click for the previous chapter): Chapter 1

Can't you see? (Nchaa's original)

Tau apa yang dikerjakan Nchaa selama jam tutorial sementara gue dengan rajinnya ngerjain soal soal fisika yang dikasih oleh Mr Andre (yang hari ini sedang berulangtahun HAPPY BIRTHDAY SIR wish you all the best :))? Jawabannya adalah yang di bawah Ini:



Ini yang lebih jelasnya:

Bebi: "Tauga Pris aku sayang banget ama kamu aku gamau keilangan kamu istilahnya tuh i dont wanna lose you... yes I wanna hold you... gitu looh Pris."
Prissy: "Iya iya aku tau kok beb."
Bebi: "Terus?"
Prissy: "Terus apaan?"
Bebi: "Kmau terima aku apa nggak?"
Prissy: "Oh tadi kamu nembak?"
Bebi: Iya kali."
Prissy: "Yang bener dong.."
Bebi: "Iya iya aku nembak."
Prissy: "Hmm... imana ya?"
Bebi: "Lah, kok, gimana ya? Katanya kamu sayang ama aku?"
Prissy: "Iya aku sayaaaang banget sama kamu bebi kuuu."
Bebi: "Terus kenapa kamu masih gamau berima aku? Masa kita terus-terus-an HTS-an begini. Kan gabisa!"
Prissy: "Iya aku tau... tapi aku masih sayang banget sama Koyo."
Bebi: Koyo lagi! Kamu masih aja nunggu dia terus! Dia itu ngomong ama kamu aja gapernah Pris. Dan dia gapernah peduli sama sekali ama kamu! Bisa nggak sih kamu terima kenyataan aja?!"
Prissy: "Ih bebi kok ngomong gitu sih? Kan nothing's impossible. kamu cuman ngancurin harapan aku doang sih?"
Bebi: "Yaa.. kamu mesti liat dong, kalo di sini tuh ada aku! Aku, yang sayang ama kamu, yang peduli ama kamu... sakit, tauga? Kamu terus-terusan ngasih harapan kosong gitu tapi ngomongin si ITU lagi di depan mata aku! Aku tuh mesti ngapain lagi Pris? Mesti ngomong apa lagi ama kamu, biar kamu mau ngeliat aku?!! Aku udah kasih kamu apa aja, mau ngapain aja. Kamu bilang sayang sama aku tapi kamunya begitu sama aku! Kamu ngertiin perasaan aku juga dong, tega banget sih kamu ama aku!!"
Prissy: "Nggak beb, maksudku..."
Bebi: "Kamu tuh... Tau nggak sih kalo aku sayang banget ama kamu?!!!" *BEBI PERGI, MENINGGALKAN PRISSY SENDIRI*

"Can't you see that I'm the one
who understands you
been here all along
so why can't you see?
you belong with me
have you ever thought
just maybe
you belong with me"

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It's original, it's Nchaa's :D

Note: Pokoknya sampe gue suka lo tanggung jawab ya Chaa SEMUA SALAH LO pokoknya hauhauhauaha XD